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Every marketing guide, every YouTube video, every course you’ve ever seen says the same thing: lead with benefits, not features. And look, that advice isn’t wrong exactly. But the way most people apply it? It’s basically copy-pasting the same five words onto every product page on the internet. “Helps you save time.” “Grow your business.” “Transform your workflow.” I’ve written stuff like that too. Early on, I thought I was doing it right because I’d followed the rule. But when everything sounds the same, the rule stops working, and nobody told me that part. Here’s the thing. That advice was written for a world where your product was new and nobody knew what it did. You had to explain the “why” before anything else made sense. That made sense then. But now? You’re on Etsy or Fiverr or a Shopify store, and there are 400 other sellers using that exact same benefit line. Word for word. So the benefit you thought would make you different is the exact reason nobody notices you. Research actually shows that features outperform benefits in two specific situations: when the buyer is highly technical, and when the feature itself is what makes you different. Most people don’t even know those situations exist, so they never think to check which one they’re in. Think about YouTube Premium for a second. Their real line is “enjoy YouTube without ads, offline, and in the background.” That’s features. Pure features. And it works because “ads” is a specific, real thing you can picture. Now compare that to something like “watch your favorite videos without distractions, anywhere, anytime.” Technically that’s a benefit. It’s also completely forgettable because it could describe anything. The more specific one just works better. I’ve seen it enough to believe it now. So here’s what I’d actually think about before writing your next product description. Look at what your top two or three competitors are saying. If they’re all using the same benefit language, that’s your sign to go the other way and just say what the thing does. Clearly, in plain words, without trying to sound important. Not because features are always better. But because in a crowded market, being clear is the same as being different. Try it on one listing first and see what happens. Talk soon, Minosh P.S. Also, writing a benefit-heavy description and wondering why nobody’s clicking? This is probably why. |
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